Just a thought, you might want to change the font used for the title there. To Aru Majutsu no Index on baka tsuki seems to have a decent typesetter/redrawer, so you might want to learn from them. (This is an amateur review, please don’t get offended).
Want some help with the redraw/typeset? xD
Btw, the font should be something else. It looks really simple (in a bad way)
Feedback and help will be appreciated! You can email me if there’s anything specific you want to do.
naisu! （ ・∀・）
And thus I am reminded of how terrible I am when it comes to anything involving drawing or editing images.
Nice job on the redraw.
Don’t be like that, practice makes perfect and learn your tools! Her hands is actually three middle fingers XD…
Rook same
Just a thought, you might want to change the font used for the title there. To Aru Majutsu no Index on baka tsuki seems to have a decent typesetter/redrawer, so you might want to learn from them. (This is an amateur review, please don’t get offended).
Ah I don’t mind at all! I’m a rookie, so I’ll take any constructive criticism I can get!
Did you actually draw hand+hair from scratch or is there a non-text version of the cover?
I redrew the hair but I actually used a reference for the hand and copied it over that, with a few modifications.